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Inläggsrubrik: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: ons 23 jun 2010, 18:25 |
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Kerplunk! |
Blev medlem: fre 01 jan 2010, 22:03 Inlägg: 185
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en låt jag skrev idag inte så bra men
I feel so alone no one hear me scream Sometimes I wonder when you stand by my side. Why did you leave? In this cold and pathetic world isn’t anything going right. I don’t know what to do. Please can you be therefore me just this time. I thought I did know you But I was wrong So wrong
It´s like a hellhole I’m living. Why am I here? Living I fear. Why where you there? Making me scared Heart of stone, Hitting hard. Blood falling down.
We laugh together. You made me smile. But that was then. Please come back as you where I don’t wanna live in fear I just want you there
så vad tycker ni?
Senast redigerad av GDlove4ever sön 27 jun 2010, 23:23, redigerad totalt 1 gång.
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GDlove4ever
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: sön 27 jun 2010, 18:57 |
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Blev medlem: fre 01 jan 2010, 22:03 Inlägg: 185
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en låt som jag skrev typ en månad efter att min katt dog sen så e en del om min farfar
Like angels are flying Like birds are flying through the sky Do I know that you are there somewhere. Where you are I wonder still today. Are you there? Are you here? Why did you fly away?
To stars to the heaven that still believe in. I just want to find you some day. I want to see you again. Just to hear your name makes me cry like a fool. I want you to know that you’re still in my heart.
I remember the days I spent with you. It’s a loving moment that I never forget The feeling to know that you’re in a better place now
To stars to the heaven that still believe in. I just want to find you some day. I want to see you again. Just to hear your name makes me cry like a fool. I want you to know that you’re still in my heart.
I love you and I will never forget you Forget you I know you up there somewhere and one day will I find you
vad tycks?
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GDlove4ever
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: sön 27 jun 2010, 23:00 |
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Kerplunk! |
Blev medlem: fre 01 jan 2010, 22:03 Inlägg: 185
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en låt jag skrev nyss
Stars are falling down the sky Make a wish before it’s too late The dark shy is lightening up by a beautiful star. The most beautiful I’ve ever seen. Hearts gets broken. Tears are falling down. To the deepest chasm.
Hold on hard in everything that means something Cause someday you’re going to lose it. Lose it all. Lose control. Fucking lose control You are maybe thinking that it is going to last forever. But hearts get broken and people get hurt. So never believe in something someone says if you know it’s not true. Cause you’re going to get hurt forever. Going to have scars that last forever and you know it
Hold on hard in everything that means something Cause someday you’re going to lose it. Lose it all. Lose control. Fucking lose control
You know that you can trust yourself. Casue it’s your life And don’t cry for someone that doesn’t deserve it. Cause you know it’s not right. So clean up your face and go on. Go on and forget
kan nån tycka någoting? har fått höra av min kompis att dom är bra men jag undrar vad någon annan tycker
Senast redigerad av GDlove4ever sön 27 jun 2010, 23:28, redigerad totalt 2 gånger.
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GREENDAYSYNDROME
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: sön 27 jun 2010, 23:10 |
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Nimrod. |
Blev medlem: tis 05 maj 2009, 14:58 Inlägg: 2259 Ort: Uppsala
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Jag diggar't! Har ingen direkt kritik, mer än att du skrivit "are I'm" i första. Det borde vara "am I" :>
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GDlove4ever
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: sön 27 jun 2010, 23:20 |
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Kerplunk! |
Blev medlem: fre 01 jan 2010, 22:03 Inlägg: 185
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tack märkte inte det
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: sön 27 jun 2010, 23:24 |
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Dookie |
Blev medlem: sön 25 okt 2009, 17:53 Inlägg: 1291 Ort: Norrtälje
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_________________ Time passes by like lightning, before you know it you're struck down
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GDlove4ever
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: sön 27 jun 2010, 23:29 |
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Kerplunk! |
Blev medlem: fre 01 jan 2010, 22:03 Inlägg: 185
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Tack det blir alltid små fel när jag skriver
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Tiiiiilda
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: mån 28 jun 2010, 12:55 |
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Dookie |
Blev medlem: tor 15 okt 2009, 20:39 Inlägg: 1016
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^ Det blir det nog för de flesta
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GDlove4ever
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: mån 28 jun 2010, 21:46 |
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Kerplunk! |
Blev medlem: fre 01 jan 2010, 22:03 Inlägg: 185
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To be perfect In this world is everything about to be perfect. To be accepted. To be strong so you can hold up everything. But that’s not easy to hold tougher. And everything that I want you know that I do anything to make things right. But I fail every time even how hard I even try
To live on the other side Live like in a magazine. To be rich, to be loved To live like the happy stories that you read about. To live like in a fucking fairy tale. To be happy all the time.
If you think that I can be perfect. So shall you know that to do everything to please you. I open whole my heart you make you happy. But you just want everything to be perfect
To live on the other side Live like in a magazine. To be rich, to be loved To live like the happy stories that you read about. To live like in a fucking fairy tale. To be happy all the time.
It’s impossible to live here if everything is perfect It’s always something wrong that I do. I know that I can’t be perfect But I do all that I can do. Everyone those mistakes sometimes
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GDlove4ever
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: mån 28 jun 2010, 23:39 |
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Kerplunk! |
Blev medlem: fre 01 jan 2010, 22:03 Inlägg: 185
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To be embraced, to be loved to feel the secure. It was years ago I felt that way. When I knew you were there. You where always there when I cried. I was young when you left my side. I was hurt and scared. I didn’t know what to do
How am I gonna do this? How am I gonna trust? Why am I alone in this world? I was scared when you left. I didn’t know anything. Cause I was to young
I did think I meant everything or you. What the hell did I do to you. You did know that you hurt me. But you didn’t care Cause you’re mean and cruel You don’t give a skit what someone else thinks
How am I gonna do this? How am I gonna trust? Why am I alone in this world? I was scared when you left. I didn’t know anything. Cause I was to young
Everyone else think you’re nice and so. But when it’s just me and you are you someone else You don’t have emotions you don’t care. It’s all about you. You think you don’t have done something when I am hurt as the most. I cry my soul out every day cause of you
vad tycker ni?
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GDlove4ever
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: tis 29 jun 2010, 18:07 |
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Kerplunk! |
Blev medlem: fre 01 jan 2010, 22:03 Inlägg: 185
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en låt som en del e inspirerad av mina "underbara" föräldrar I’m not an angel I’m not a saint. I’m not the girl that you think I am I am not going to walk in a dress and act nice and all that shit. I’m not under your control. I can break your teeth I can break it all. Don’t cry when you’re down on the floor. When you’re bleeding and your scars are deep.
Hit it, crash it Make it loud. I want to hear your scream in pain. I don’t going to stop till your dead. I want to see your face when you crying I want to see your eyes when you’re screaming
When you said I was your little girl Did I feel the sting and the anger in me. I just wanted to scream in your face. I’m not yours and I never will be. You’re just nothing and it always will be so. You’re just a loser in a loser town. You have said shit to me. Like you never going to be something. You just suck on everything. I hate fucking hate you. How could you always be like that?
Hit it, crash it. Make it loud. I want to hear your scream in pain. I don’t going to stop till your dead. I want to see your face when you crying. I want to see your eyes when you’re screaming
The word I heard before like I love you. Doesn’t mean anything now You made me hurt and broken just want to see you hurt. Hurt and crying like you made me do. Lose control and lose it all.vad tycker ni? jag tål kritik (men beröm vore ju inteså dålig )
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GDlove4ever
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: ons 30 jun 2010, 16:56 |
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Kerplunk! |
Blev medlem: fre 01 jan 2010, 22:03 Inlägg: 185
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okej jag behövde värkligen skriva ut mig på nått sätt. för att mina själmordstankar och min döttslängtan har kommit tillbaka igen All this years I wonder why am I still here? All this hate that’s existing in this world. Why am I here? I never wanted to be here. Cause all of that screaming. I can’t take it more.
Why is it like this? I want away from this place. Cause of all pain that existing Why can’t I fly away? Just leave I don’t want to be hurt anymore I want away right now Why does it go so slow?
I just want the secure. I tried it all. I don’t belong here All that I want to leave Just say goodbye and leave
I can’t take all this Why don’t I get to leave now? I want away from this world Cause I don’t mean anything I just a little shit that no one cares about
I just want to die Fast and painless No one would even care. Why is it like this? Why isn’t it like all this happy stories you read? I’m just a big mistake.
So I want to say goodbye And leave it after that But questions running in my head. Why am I here? What am I doing heresäg gärna vad ni tycker
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SeptemberNeverEnds
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: ons 30 jun 2010, 20:26 |
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Insomniac |
Blev medlem: sön 11 okt 2009, 19:33 Inlägg: 1864 Ort: skåne
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^ Jag gillar den! tycker du skriver på ett bra sätt, men du behöver nog jobba lite på gramatiken bara. Men har för mig att du är ganska ung(13?), du lär dig med åren Jag var inte så bra på engelska som du när jag var 13 kan jag säga. Keep up the good work
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there is nothing wrong with me this is how I'm supposed to be
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GDlove4ever
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: ons 30 jun 2010, 20:37 |
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Kerplunk! |
Blev medlem: fre 01 jan 2010, 22:03 Inlägg: 185
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Tack jag ska bli 14. hehe vet att jag behöver öva på min gramatik vi hade bara engelska första delen av året (till jul lovet) sen så har vi bara haft vikarier. men dom hjälpte ju inget för vi skrämde iväg alla vi hade. hade dom max 2 gånger (stökigaste klassen på skolan typ)
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GreenDayFTW
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Inläggsrubrik: Re: GDlove4evers stuff Postat: ons 30 jun 2010, 23:19 |
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Kerplunk! |
Blev medlem: tor 05 nov 2009, 21:15 Inlägg: 212
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Jättebra skrivet! Lite grammatiksfel här och där dock men det är inte mycket.
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