Jaha.. Äh, jag brukar inte skylta med att jag skriver låtar ddirekt då, så jag får inte så mycket respons på kvaliteten på texterna.. Så jag tänkte att ni kanske kunde komma med lite konstruktiv kritik^^

Drumsticks
Why are you so hard to find?
I don't wanna play hide and seek
I thought it was so many of your kind
But, oh, I was wrong

So what have I to do
To get you out of your cave?
Maybe I shouldn't mind,
Just let it go some time

I wish I could find you under a stone
But no, I won't
You're playing hard to get
And that pisses me of

Stop playing me around
Or I will give you one so hard
you'll hit the ground
Unlike you I don't joke

Come on, don't do this to me
What do I got to
To make you see
We got to add you to us three?

Go To Sleep With a Broken Heart
I kwow it all feels like crap
I know it hurts
It all seemed so right
but, hell, it was wrong
You asked him to the dance
He said no
I know it feels like crap

I'll sing you to sleep
But there is nothing I can do
to make hom love you to
I can't promise you it will be alright
when the sun rises tomorrow
But one thing is for sure
I'll never turn my back
I'll never close my door

I know he showed you off
with his cold face
First he mad you feel special
then said you were mad
You did cry
I know he showed you off

He acted so strange
You tought he liked you
the way you like him
But then he slaped your brain
He was so strange
You deserve better
You know you do
I know you do

Det kommer fler senare^^

Ny låt, tänkte få lite prof. bedömning

Infatuated
So here we go again
Boy and girl meet
Girl fell in love with boy
Now she doesn’t have the guts that it takes
To tell him about the way
Her infatuated mind thinks
When he enters the room

The girl sees him every day
Her mind drifts away
She sees the boy every day
Still she can’t say
The words that’s dwelling in her head

So here we go again
The girl sees him
Once again he’s perfect
But what the hell should you do
When you have an infatuated mind
And your brain breaks down
When he smiles across the room?

But one day the girl will have
All of the guts that it takes
To spit out dwelling words in her head
But then it will be too late
And the boy has waked away
Drowned in someone else’s mind